exorcist, frederik hiroshi

[Frederik Hiroshi]

[style=font-family: arial; font-size: 20px; margin-bottom: 3px; letter-spacing: -1px; color: 212121; text-align: left; border-bottom: 2px solid #e1e1e1;]alias: kiddo/junior

WELCOME TO THE ORDER, SOLDIER

"Sorry...but i have no one else in this world except you."

[atrb=cellpadding,0,true][atrb=border,0,true][atrb=valign,top] NAME Frederik Yuu Hiroshi AGE Fifteen ETHNICITY Japanese/German

[atrb=valign,top] GENDER male SEXUALITY pansexual he's still a kid though INITIATED age 12

APPEARANCE Short, well that pretty much sums it up. But this lad here is stand at about five feet two inches, well some may call him tall for his age or short but regardless for him he's just short. At the same time weighing at about one hundred and twenty pounds, some all him chubby but he like to consider himself to be at a proportional weight. Junior has a distinct messy short silver hair but it is his green colored eye that stood out from him.

THE PERSONALITY

- Naive ~ Junior was initiated or brought to the order at a young age of twelve, not much is known about his parents. However since the age of twelve he has been inside the order and rarely goes outside, that in itself caused him to have this blind eye to the real world. All he knows are the order and the member inside it, he knows nothing about the real world. While some members inside the order believes this as a good trait for him it also caused him to have a narrow view of the world and caused him to see everything as white as there is no such thing as black.

- High Empathy ~ despite being brought at a young age Junior was rarely sent to mission due to his weird personality. Junior cannot see blood regardless, for him no one deserve to die. For Junior regardless of one's alignment no one deserve to die nor hurt each other, it does create some problems during missions hence his lack of missions.

- Childish ~ Junior is very childish as he was brought at a very young age, he was in one way spoiled by the member of the order due to his young age. This caused him to be very childish at some point even at this age, despite growing older he maintains that childish side. Some even consider him to be spoiled and which in turn turned him into a pretty selfish kid sometimes.

- Passive ~ pretty self explanatory, he dislike battle nor anything related to it. If it is possible he would avoid it fighting and remain passive.

- Secretive ~ Despite his childish attitude Junior is a secretive person when it comes to his feelings and opinions, he feels that his opinions inferior and has no relevance for other people. As he grew up at the order he realised how important it is to keep his feelings to himself, for him it kept everyone at the order happy.

- Inferiority Complex ~ yes Junior suffers from inferiority complex despite being initiated at a young age, his passiveness led him to feeling inferior to the other exorcist. As he realised battles are inevitable but he himself cannot force himself to fight, he realised how useless he is at battle due to his inexperience hence his inferiority complex.

- Humorous/playful ~ The people inside the order consider him the joker just because he likes to play pranks on unsuspecting people and often get chase around the order. But it makes the order far more lively with his presence. Of course his tends to make pranks on very odd times and he has this bad timing where he tends to pull pranks when the situation is serious or when someone is pissed. Although nowadays he is trying not to put on anymore pranks.

- Knowledgeable ~ despite his lack of willingness to fight Junior knowledge about akuma, exorcist and the order are far from the new recruits. Being in the order since the age of twelve he has been taught various things and despite his passiveness his knowledgeable about these kind of things can be proven to be very useful at times.

- Follower ~ he is nor leader material for sure, he is more of a follower. He can follow orders find so long as it has nothing to do with battles and the likes, however if he were given the opportunity to lead something he would obviously fail. He is too nice to be a leader, he can't say no to other people and it can be quite disastrous for a leader.

MISCELLANEOUS FACTS

- He was actually sold by his family to the order, because they were afraid Junior might be some weird kid.

- The order lied about his family and told him his family are all dead.

- He tried to smuggle in a little dog but was caught by the other members, although now he is trying to figure out how to smuggle in a pet inside the order.

- The Science division is his playground because for him there are a lot of games and toys there, yes he consider those lab as toys.

OUT OF CHARACTER

OOC NAME Con
DISCOVERY 6th sense ad
OTHER CHARACTERS nop nop
FACE CLAIM
[b]final fantasy xiii[/b] - hope estheim, [i]frederik hiroshi[/i]
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[Frederik Hiroshi]

[style=font-family: arial; font-size: 20px; margin-bottom: 3px; letter-spacing: -1px; color: 212121; text-align: left; border-bottom: 2px solid #e1e1e1;]innocence: Ruboid

Rubrik Cube

TYPE equipment

LEVEL 01

UNACTIVATED It is a simple Rubik's cube, a simple 2x2 Rubik cube decorated with the color grey. Hence this Rubik's cube looks dull with it's simple grey color, very different to other Rubik's cube. Even the size is similar to any other Rubik cube.

ACTIVATED When activated this once dull colored innocence changed colors into two different colors, half of this cube is colored white and the other half is colored black. Upon activating an almost transparent barrier can be seen surrounding the cube making it float around the air, hence there is no need for Junior to actually hold the cube as it floats around Junior. As for the size it remains like that of a 2x2 Rubik cube and is no different to it's unactivated state size. The only difference is the transparent green barrier that surrounds the innocence itself, indicating that it has been activated.

OVERALL ABILITY This innocence is a simple innocence in a sense that it generates a cubic shape container that literally contains the intended target inside it. Anyone inside it will be affected by this innocence, the effect of this innocence is dependent upon the color of the cubic container that contained the target itself. The ability does not make the innocence grow in size it just produces cubic shaped cage that envelops the enemy, however the innocence itself will turn into a dull/black color once an ability is activated indicating that an ability is being used at the moment. The cool down period will be noted by the dull color of the innocence itself, once the colors has return to the innocence then the abilities can be activated again.


The second part of this innocence is the colors of the cube, each color will have different effect to the enemy some may have a lasting effect while some have an immediate effect upon the enemy.

Despite closing off the target from the outside world the abilities of this innocence can be stopped prematurely. Once the cage materialize anyone inside the cage container that is of higher level than the exorcist can easily destroy the cage hence ending the ability prematurely. Another way would be for outside interferences to actually occur, if anyone were to attack the cage itself from the outside and of a higher level than the exorcist it is possible to end the abilities.

Another thing that needs to be noted with this particular innocence is that the abilities of this innocence knows no friend nor foe, for anyone within the cage will be affected by the ability regardless. Currently Junior can only produce 3 cages at one time.

Hakushoku Hikari This utilize the white side of the innocence, upon the invocation of this ability. The white side of the innocence itself (Rubik) will turn into a dull color indicating that this ability is being used, so once this ability is deactivated the innocence itself will have a white colored cube visible on one side.

This ability creates a cubic container, that takes 1 post to materialize. Hence this is an area of effect ability, once activated a rather transparent white light will surround the area indicating the area of effect. The cage/cubic container itself will materialize on the next post, hence anyone this ability can be avoided. Once materialize anyone outside of the shield will not be able to see anyone inside it and vice versa, hence this cubic container literally shuts the target from the outside world.

Once materialize this cubic cage will emit fire and burn anyone inside it, of course this is dependent upon the synchronization rate of the exorcist. At the current level only level 1 akumas can be destroyed through the use of this ability anyone of higher level will not be affected.

Activation time: 1 post
Effect: 1 post
Cool down: 2 posts


Yamiyo This ability utilize the black side of the Rubik cube and in all simplicity is to stop the intended target's movement. Once activated the black side of the innocence will turn into a dull color indicating this ability is being used at the moment. Black light will surround the intended area of effect before the cage actually materialize hence allowing the possibility for anyone to escape before the cage materializes. Once it materialize it will closed off the target/s from the outside world, from the outside it will appear as a black cubic container.

Once materializes the cage will emit electricity that does no harm to the targets however it paralyzes their movement for as long as the cage is activated (2posts). There are several ways to break this ability, one is if anyone inside it is of a higher level/power than the exorcist can easily break the cage ending the ability prematurely. Another would be for outside interference (has to be of a higher level or power in nature compared to the exorcist) to actually break the cage.

Activation time: 1 post
Active for: 2 posts if there is no interference
Cool down: 2 posts

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[CRYSTAL & AYUMI]

Two things. face claim should be all lowercase.

And Japanese/unknown? What? Please elaborate. Or you know pick something. lololol Not unknown.

[CRYSTAL & AYUMI]

PENDING.

• you continually misspell 'utilizing' as 'utilising' |D;
  

• This innocence uses shield and the main ability would be to create a square shield trapping either an enemy or an ally.

  The first half of that sentence is incoherent - I'm guessing / assuming this means the innocence creates shields? Please make it a little clearer.
  

• Hakushoku Hikari A very simple technique utilising the white side of the cube, once the intended target is trapped within the white shield. The shield will start to emit flames inside it burning anyone inside it, of course at the current level this technique can only kill level one akuma anyone with higher level may not even be affected by the flames. Instant effect and has 2 posts cool down.

  You never explicitly state that this creates a white shield - also, 'shield' would be the wrong word in this entire scenario. Describe what exactly this 'shield' looks like, because to me, it seems more of a cubic shape / cage; also, please explain how / where this materializes. To say that it automatically envelops an enemy is OP - say something like how he can get it to surround people, etcetera.
  

  The shield will start to emit flames inside it burning anyone inside it, of course at the current level this technique can only kill level one akuma anyone with higher level may not even be affected by the flames. Instant effect and has 2 posts cool down.

  Split this up into two or three sentences, right now it's barely coherent and hard to understand.
  

• Yamiyo Another simple technique utilisng the black side of the cube, once the shield is in place. Anyone inside it be it an ally or enemy will be paralyzed for 2 posts and this technique has a cooldown of 3 posts. Anyone inside it will be unable to see anything outside the shield as the shield will turn everything black. Anyone trapped inside that is of a higher level that the exorcist can easily break off the shield ending the shield prematurely.

  Again, never explicitly stated this creates a 'shield,' the shield is a wrong word here, as well as how / where this materializes.
  
• Please be clearer about everything - does your innocence weapon itself grow larger to envelop enemies, or does it just float, and produce cubes? If it produces cubes, put a limit on how many you can make. Also try to describe how strong the shield is, so one can gauge what it takes to break it.
  
• Please fix your application title. The directions explicitly state that the name should be all lowercase.

[CRYSTAL & AYUMI]

If you changed face claims, please change the icon in the second post. 8I